feed back on Scientific Paper Activity / Plant growth with small percentages of water replaced with ocean water

Scientific Paper: Reviewer’s Template
Your name: (insert here)
Note: usually reviews in science are anonymous, but for this class, we are waiving this requirement.
Last name of the author being reviewed: Daly
Title of paper being reviewed: Plant growth with small percentages of water replaced with ocean water.
Guidelines: Answer the questions below. In addition to answering “yes” or “no”, explain your answers. The more specific you are, the better the author can improve his/her draft. If there is a problem with some part of the paper, copy and paste the problem section into this document and suggest improvements.
IMPORTANT NOTE ABOUT YOUR GRADE FOR THIS: You must NOT simply give a bunch of compliments. You MUST provide helpful comments, which might seem difficult for you to do because you are pointing out flaws and that might not seem polite. Nevertheless, it is a requirement of this assignment. You will get a bad grade if you are only “nice.”
Remember, you are reviewing TWO papers. Be concise, but helpful.
When you submit this assignment, it will be visible to the author, who will use it to improve his/her draft.
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Did the author commit a type 1 “sin” (not enough time)? If so, explain.
No, based on the type of plant the writer used for the experiment, the time frame was okay, and the information could have been correct.
Did the author commit a type 2 “sin�…