I have listed my thesis below, could use advice on that as well. May be too long / combine Main ideas

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The Gun Control
Gun control is a law that is intended to impose legal measures to give a license, organize, or give restriction to the ownership of a gun by the associate of the community. The gun control differs significantly all around the world. Some countries have a very little restriction on gun possession while other have very strict restriction on gun ownership (Jacobs, 94). The responsibility of the gun control sponsor should be to make sure that the criminals, young people, and other individual who could attempt the high risks with the gun not to get access to them. Some change such as the prohibition of a person from owning the gun or registering does not hinder the individual from having a gun since there are no constitution barriers to such measure and no important social costs.
With the gun control, the government limits the individual’s rights of armed self-defense as illustrated in the second amendment. The second amendment in the constitution gives the right for an individual to bear arms in any situation due to self-defense. The gun control and the gun right have a long and good record, even if both sides in the gun argument claims to have history on their side; every has presented a privilege report of the past. A good example of such constitution is the constitution of the United States. It contains the Bill of Rights and the second Amendment. It states that a well-regulated militia is a necessity to the security of …