Email Revisions

Name
Instructor
Course
Date
Scenario 1: Susan’s Email:
TO: (Professor’s Name)
FROM: (Student’s Name)
DATE:
Dear (Sir/Madam),
RE: COMPLAINT ON BAD GRADE IN ANTHROPOLOGY
I am a student in your Anthropology class. I am writing this email concerning an issue with my final class grade on the homework that was submitted at the end of the second week into the semester. I have consistently achieved a good rank in anthropology since joining college. It is one of my favorite subjects, therefore studying for it is enjoyable because it is a passion. For this specific class task, I thoroughly identified reliable sources to assist in conducting vast research on the topic. Before beginning the assignment, I planned my time with a schedule that helped me in managing my time because I was using scholarly articles, online data and library books. Besides, I also visited an anthropologist to gather more information and research to help me understand the subject further. However, even with all my input, I scored a bad grade that does not reflect my contribution. With all the information gathered, I wrote an excellent paper, and I was confident of attaining a good grade because I followed all the instructions on the rubric.
On the other hand, my friend wrote the assignment a few hours before the final date of submission but scored higher grades. The difference between her grade and my score is enormous. I understand professors are strict in grading assignments. However, I am requ…